Friday, January 13, 2012

GAMOUSHA'S DIARIES Part30 (the end)


Helloo beauties ..

this post is dedicated to everyone read this story;*

its finally the end:D

I HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT!!

enjoy it and post your comment please please everyone ou el silent readers elkel i want to know your comments ok?;*






JAAAD TANARFAZTT!! ENSHALLAH MA YA6REDNI MIN SAYYARTA!!! KAFEE 
GRADY YA3NII!!

I entered our house ou 7addii m3a9ba ..

No one was there ..

I went to my room, locked the door and started to cry!!

7assait enna wain ma a6eg’ha 3oya men agoul tesanna3 ou 9erna 7elween 9ar shay kharrab 3alaina!!

Ya3ni shfeeha etha dashait nadi furouseya!!

I decided to take a shower ..

After my warm lovely shower I went to sleep ..

At 1:30 pm I woke up ..

Manoura was reading a book in my room ..

Me wonderingly: manoura?

Mnera happily: 9aba7 elkhair

Me: 9aba7 enour

Mnera: shsawaitay eb exam elyoum?

Me: el7emdellah! Esh3endech ga3da eb dary?

Mnera: kashkash abee ashba3 menechh!!

I smiled ..

Me: 7ayaaatee

Mnera: ee sharait dress 7g elmelchaa wait bawarecheyya

Akhh 3ala hal melcha elly galbi 7as enha mara7 et9eer!!!

Me: ok

She brought her dress and show it to me ..

It was fabulous on her ..

Me: wooow eyaanennn

Mnera shyly: 7elfayy?

Me: waallaah manayer bet9kken 3alay shaklech

Mnera: shaklyy hehe

I giggled ..

Mnera: kashkash teyyen ne6la3?

Me: waiin?

Mnera: ay mukan abee ashba3 mennich ou bmunasabat enich 3a6altay

Me: okk

Actually I need someone to get me out of my bad mood ..

Manoura left to her room and I changed my clothes ..

After half an hour ..

Mnera: gamousha khallastay?

Me: ee ee yallah

I followed her to her car ..

We went to 360 mall ..

We sit in laduree’ ..

Ordered some macaroons and coffee ..

Mnera: gamousha ana khayfaa

Me: min shinuu 7ayattee??

Mnera: madri ra7 afgedeech!!

Me: manoura getlech ra7 akalmech 9adgeni ana ra7 afgedech gabel ma tafgedeeny

Mnera: ra7 at3awad enshallahh

Me: manoura tahaawasht ma3a Rakan

Mnera shocked: chathabaa!!!!

Me: wallah!

Mnera: besmellah laaishh??

Me: mtan7er ma yabeeni adesh furouseyyaa!!! 3ad elyoum getla eni eshtarakt ena ba7e6a jedam elamr 
elwaqe3 3a9ab!!!

Mnera: maynouuunaaaa??? 7araam tkharben elly bainkum 3ashan furouseyyaa!!

Me: manouuura meshtahyaa a9eerr knight

Mnera: faraaaghtech!!!!! Ana barou7 azef Reema hathy ya3ni khal testaw3eb enech eb fatrat khu6ba 
mu wagta hal suwalef abaih ma a9adegkum!!!!

Me: ham entay bet3a9ben ba3ad? Gomy gomay khanshouf lena film!

Mnera: mu 3an ba3a9eb bs mawqefech ghala6 gamousha!!!

Me: ok emshay el cinema!

Mnera: ok yallahh!

We went to the cinema , booked 2 tickets for one of the adventure movies ..

It took 2 hours and then we went back home ..

Manoura’s talk made me want to call Rakan and apologize ..

So I went to my room and called him ..

The first time he ignored me ..

Second ..

Third ..

Forth ..

Fifth .. FINALLY .. He picked it up ..

Lazem 7arakat el ignoring!!!

Rakan: aloo

Me: aloo

Me: rakan

Rakan: na3am

Me: I’m sorry

Rakan: 3ala shinu?

Ok gemt tqalled esloby!!!

Me: ely elyoum

Rakan: ana bafham shay wa7ed laish le3naad??

Me: 7ettan ana bafham hashay laish laa!!!

Rakan: ya3ni 3ashan getlech la2 gemtay ou 3anadtay?

Me: laa walla mu chethy esalfa bs ana meshtahya adesh went gelt la bedoun sebab!!

Rakan: ya3ni gelt laa ou re7tay ou dashaitay!!

Me: laish la2!!!

Rakan: bs mabeech edesheen!

Me: mafee shay esma bas 3a6ni sabab muqne3 ya akhee!!

Rakan: tabeen sebab muqne3??

Me: eeh!

Rakan: tathkeren youm getlech khansafer hawai??

Ohh noo!!!

Me: eeh

Rakan: tathkereen youm getlech menzemaan meshtehyy ou na6er atzawwaaj???

Me: athker!

Rakan: ou tathkeren shinu kan radechh?? Geltay laa ma naby , ya bent el7alal laish bs mabe hatha 
sabaab eb natharech??

Me: fee sabab bs enta mara7 tefhemaa!!

Rakan: hatha sebabech ohwa nafsa sebaby al7en bs entay mara7 tefhemen!!

Me: rakan men 9ijek tqaren hawai eb nadi furouseyya!!

Rakan: ee 6ab3an!! Minu elly bedarbech?? Bnayya?? Minu elly besa3dech awal marra?? Bnayya??

Me: kho ta3leemm hatha!!

Rakan: ou ana khayef 3aalaich elkhail mala amaan!!! Bs ma3a elasaf ma qadarty hashay ou 
eshtaraktay!!

Me nervously: MA ESHTARAKT!!!! Yaa kellma redy mukanech!!! Eshda3wa 3alaik!!

Rakan shocked: na3am?? Echathben 3alay gmasha?

Astaghferu allah el3atheem!!

Rakan: gmasha e7na makh6oubeen!!! Laish ma n3eesh a7la ayyamna? Laish tdeshen shay yashghelech 
3anny!!! 9edamteny!! Echathbeen 3alay 3ashan shay ma yeswaa??

Me: efff ent laish edawer elmashakel goully laaishh!!!

Rakan: many rad 3alaich gemty tkharbe6een!! Faman allah

He closed it!!!

Ok adri enny ghal6ana bs khalas ya3ni same7nyy!!

Reema called my 100 times to tell me about tomorrow bs I ignored her cz mu wagt’haaa!!!!!

That was not my day ..

Its Sunday ..

I woke up at 12:30 ..

I looked at my mobile expecting something from HIM but unfortunately there was nothing ..

I really don’t know what to do!!! Bs I wont do anything I apologized already ou he didn’t accept it fa 
khal yet7amal!

I went to the bathroom took a fresh warm shower and wore a Hollywood planet pullover and a lagging 
..

Then I took my mobile and went down stairs ..

Suddenly my mobile rang ..

I HOPE ITS RAKAN!!!

Guess who??

Its FAY!!!!!!!!!

I was really surprised!!!

Me wonderingly: alo?

Fay: hiiiii shlounech shakhbarech shedenya feechhh??

Hmmm ..

Me: el7emdellah! Entay?

Fay: tamam! Mabrouuukkk 7aram 3alaich ma tgoulleen!

You knew it!

Me: gaylatlech kelshay ou awal wa7da unfortunately

Fay: 7aram 3alaich ma gelteelly ena melchetech next week atzahhab 3alaqal

What?? Tetzahebain?? You are not invited a9lan!!

Me: madrii

Fay: enzain shinu taben ayeeb weyyay 7g el3asha? Tben sweet or main dish goulay

WHAT KIND OF PEOPLE IS THAT!!!! QAAA9EB YA3NIII????

Me: mashkoura ma nabe shay

Fay: 7aram 3alaich lazem ayeeb shay!

Me: laa ma nabe!! Yayben ma63am!

Fay: ok kaifech bekoun eb baitkum 9a7?

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!

Me: fay madri talk to you later!!!

I closed it immediately I cant believe her!!!!

Ufff ..

I miss Rakani ..

a6ma7 teratheeny ya zain ou tethakkar en 3ashegek lerthak ya zain 6ame7 .. la t9eer male7 fee 
elhajer wenta SUKKAAR same7 ma fee ajmal men elly yesame7 ..

after a while Reema called me and I answered her ..

Reema: akheeran? 9arly sena adagdeg men ams wentay sa7ba 3alay!!!

Ou raddat reema le3adat’ha el qadeema ..

Me: I wasn’t in the mood ou I am still not in the mood

Reema sadly: eshfeechhh??

Me: madrii bs thayeg khelgi

Reema: ya3ni mara7 teyen neshterek?

Me: laaaa!!!

Reema: 7asafa!

Me: reema akalmech ba3dain!

Reema: ok 7ayatee

I closed it ..

I didn’t do anything that day ..

I was just crying and thinking!!

I was really sad ..

I want him to call me so badly I really missed him ..

ya sheen elwagt men doonah wana ga3ed theba7ny eshoug lah men kethr ma 7annait ana 
elghal6an ma anker wala a3aned wathen yakfee hu menny eb ghal6ety 7assaaait ..

Ahh that was my day ..

Its Monday ..

When I woke up I looked at my mobile immediately ..

But there was nothing from Rakan!!!

I want to cry!!!

He must do something lay metaaaa!!!

From GAMOUSHA’S DIARIES Part1:

“I felt that I have to please him, that was two much! 2 days without talking to him ..

I wore a white pant with navy blue shirt and tied my her into a bony tale ..

And now Im going to buy him a red rose “7addy romantic hehe”                                                     

Mnera sadly: hatha akher shay ktebta eb her diaries

Rakan bursted into tears ..

Mnera while tearing: garait shkanat katba bel card mal el bouquet??

Rakan: laa

Mnera: haak egra

Mnera gave Rakan the card ..

“please forgive me Rakani I cant live without you wallah;(
from: mushi
ps: I love you to death ..”

Rakan while crying: allahh yer7emechh allah yer7emech

Mnera and gamousha’s mom started to cry hardly ..

Rakan: kanat methel el3asal 3ala galbi a7ebha a7ebha men galbb ou youm garrab zawajnaaa … crying

Maha: ya wlaidy ta3awath men blees hathy ketbat rab el3alameen

Rakan: yalla tgadderny 3ala frag'haa

Mnera: kann galbi 7aas enny bafgedhaaa crying

Shahad: fegadna a7aan galb eb hal bait!!

7essa: 9arle sbou3 mu shayfat’haaa crying

Gamousha’s mom and dad couldn’t say a word they were just crying ..

Gamousha passed away by a car accident while she was driving home after buying Rakan a Red rose ..

She loved Rakan and Rakan loved her back ..

Rakan don’t want to get married anymore because he thinks that Gamousha is still alive in his heart and she’s his heart’s beats ..

Humans die but love is still alive .. 

24 comments:

  1. :"(!!!!!

    Great story
    Great ending
    Great writer

    thanks for all the time you spend it for thinking/ writing/ posting..

    ILOVEYOU!!

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  2. OH MY GOD!! Speeechlesssss!!!!! Waaaay laish tmooot:(((( 3yoony ghorigat!!:'( aahh allah yer7amha! Great story, awesome characters, a sad ending.. Yallah waiting for your new story!!
    -N

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  3. AHHHHHHH KASHKAASSHH lazm etbacheena ya3nii:( kafi ena last post men this story w mekta2ba w al7eeen gamouuusha tmouut wallah 3youni ghouregt your story is amazing and you yourself is amazing thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us!
    btabdeen qesa thanya? plz gouly eeh:c
    i lovee youuuu!

    -Fo

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  4. Anonymous: thankyouu thankyou thaankyouuu;******** nooo neeeddd!!! LOVE YOU MORE!!!!<3

    N: itttss okkk this is lifee!! thaaannkyouuuu deeeaaarrr<3!!! ok enshallah;*

    Fo: i liked it how you call me "kashkash" looool;p .. ba3aad 3umriii its ok:(!! THANKUUU THAANKSSS ALOOTT<3;*** NO NEED!! yess enshalaaahhh:D loooooveee youuuu tooooo!!

    waaayy a7ebkuum youuu made my day eb ur commentsss;*

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  5. ekt2bt nfsyan *cryyy*
    bs the story is AMAAAAAAZING
    looking forward for your next story i'm sure it'll amaze us
    P.S silent reader first time i EVER comment

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  6. La 7araaaam :(((
    Waaay 3ad Ana Kela a5af ena Eli a7ba ymout.. 7ala 9a3ba :(
    Law em5aleet.ha bs mareetha mo a7san?

    And please post a new story

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  7. It's a nice story i loved it bs mo 7aram 3alaich tmawteenha chithi o laaa gabl zawajha b3d? ;( Yalla Allah yr7amha inshAllah ....
    Waiting 4 ure next story!!

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  8. Anonymous1: esmellaa 3alaaichhh;* .. THANKUUU<3!! Awhh thaanks alot;$!! ba3aad 3umrii glad that ur first comment is about my story:*

    Anonymous2: this is life shensawi! i will enshallah thanku for the comment;**

    Anonymous3: thaankyouuu;* maaa mawat'haaa ela3mar beed allah!! thaaankyouuuu<3

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  9. SPEECHLESS !!!!!!! 3enii dm3at loved ur story so much .. waiting for the new one
    Gogo;

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  10. is it a real story?;/

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  11. no but my stories are collections of realistic positions mixed with my imagination
    :D

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  12. men elmalal bas garait akher cham part chan a9ek'ha mana7aa!!!!;'(
    chan khalaiteh 7ilm ou ygoum mena rakan ou yrathe gamoush!;c
    a7es fene bache ba3aad!!;'(
    khoush rewayaa! ya36ech el3afyaa bachaitena shway!;p

    -nwaira

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  13. Jad elqe9a t3awer elgalb!!! loved it wayed, ya36eich el3afya

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  14. Laaaaaiiiissshhhh 5leteeeehaaa tmoouuuutttttt ;'((((!!!!
    2aaaaa gmouuushhhh;(;(;</3
    Amazing story walah
    Qret all ur stories bs hathy 3jebaa! W 7ail '3er 3n elbajy
    Keep it up ;*

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  15. A77 unexeppted walla! Well hathy thany marra I tear because if a story and these 2 stories are ur stories! :):) well its a good but a sad storry enjoyed it walla ur verry incredibble and amazingg!!! I love u & thankyouu :* ♡-NB

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  16. Laaaaaa!!!leashh???7rammm!7lu mra bs y7aznn!!loved your story;*W 3yooni '3ra8t bdmoo3 w Ana a8ra!!WAAAY Mashalla I love your stories!!!alll of them!tyanenean!

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  17. LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA :'( !!!!
    this literally brought me to tears :(

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  18. ماحبيت النهايه بس شكرا;*

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  19. Amazing story , Amazing ending ! I lovedd it ! "Kharej 3an el ma2louf"
    Ma knt metwaq3a tmout :(!
    Ps love you , ur a gr8 writer <3

    Bibi

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  20. i know im late bs i just read the story i swear i cried.. t7azn.. your such an amazing writer mashallah... wohoo grait kl g9a9k hatha elli kan wdi aswi w swaita bs i am now reading crystal clear.. allah ywafgk a7bbkkk lamlam

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  21. WAAAAAYY AMBBBBEEEEEHH WAAAAYYY WAAAYY CUUTTTEE AMAAAAZIIINGG KEL SHAAAAAYYYY EEHE EEEH KEEL SHAAAY AWL MA GARAIT HATHA GELTA B9OUUUT 3ALEE AMBYYYY EMTY SHENUUU?? ENTYY SHENUU ?? ENTYY SHENUUU?? AMBYY INTAAY MAKU SHAAAY YA3NEE ENTAAY ENTAAYY GHHHAAIIIRRRR AMAAAZZZINNGGG WISJWKASKSKWNSJSKANSSSSSWJDBDDUWNSHDUSISJSJSJSJS WAAAAAAAYYY AMBYY TYANEEEENNNNEEENN WAAAY ZOUUGHHHA JAD 7AFOICHHH A7LAAA BLOG GARRT'HA B7YAATII LA LA THAROUURIII WRITER WAAAY TALEEENTEEEDDDD WACHHII KOUUCHHII BALEEM GAMOUUSHHHAAA AMAZINGG POST MAFS ELI KATBAAAA SUSSSJSSIEDDISSS-DALALJASSEM

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  22. Read it for the tenth time and i still cry when i read it.. A7LAAA STORYY WALLAAAA!

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  23. kashkaash�� Lazim tbacheeena 9a7? Yakfe 3aley nouf w faris! Too much akh���� - ur كياته

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