Friday, May 24, 2013

Its crystal clear .. Part45 "LAST POST"

This post is dedicated to every beautifuuul reader<33

Na6artkum wayed bhal qe9aa ou 6awalt 3alaikuuum wayed bs sam7ouny wallah i was trying my best to post quickly..

Mashkouuuuureeeen 3ala 9aberkuuum ma3aaay ou mashkoureeen 3ala youuuur comments elly tefta7 elnafs ou mashkouuuureeen lankum esta7maltaw badleyyateee ou mashkouuureeen lankum garaitaw my posts..

I LOVE YOUUUUUUUU<3








He ignored me..
Me: khaleddd a7acheeek ana!!
Khaled: ghena khaleeny akhalle9 elcheck in ou entefaaham!!
Me: ok bss rouu7 faransa brou7ek ok?
6ab3an 7agarny..
I went to the lobby’s sofa and waited for him ..
After a while he came back..
Khaled: ne9 sa3a ou tejhaz gherfatna
I ignored him ya3ni m3a9ba .. ok ana 9ej m3a9ba!!
Khaled: ou 3ala fekra 3aib t9arkheen 3ala raylech
Me: shmetwaqqe3 menny?
Khaled: tehdain ou tes’eleen shessalfa bkel hedou’
Me: ent tadry faransa shta3neelly ou ma3a hatha betwaddeeny!!! Elly befaje’ murta efaje’ha 3adel
He smiled: 9ej lai galaw 3agl elmara nage9
My eyes popped out: NA3AAAAAAAAMMMMM
Faaj’a ta3abeeer wayha taghayyarat ou bayyan 3alaih el alam..
My heart’s beats accelerated..
I knew it!!!! kent adry enna 6ala3 men elmustashfa 3ala mas’ouleeta ou .. ou elly kanat shakka fee eldektora 9ar..
Bs .. 7awalt asawy 3umry masheft ou  kammalt..
Me: e7na maku akmal men 3agelna
Khaled: em ba6ny shakla khabe6 men akel el6ayara
Me: 9ej? Rou7 el7ammam
Khaled: eeh ee lazem
He went to the bathroom..
I couldn’t stop thinking of him..
7alta 9a3ba ou kha6eeera! Luw 9ej fee fashal kelawy ou ohwa 7agra chethyy shbe9eerla? Alahh yasterrrr!!!
Weddy agoulla bas khanred lekwait bs mara7 e6eee3ny!!!!
Agoulla shrayek n’ajjel elhoneymoon? Begoul 3ugub shinu!
Ufff yaraaaabb tshafeeeh wet3afeeehh!!!!
After a while he came back..
Khaled: yallah ghenawy ghurfatna jhezat
Me: ok
We went to our room..
Khaled removed his belt and laid on the bed..
I removed my hat and sat on the sofa..
Khaled: shrayech bel ghurfa?
Me: 7elwa
Khaled: shar7a haa?
Me: wayedd
Khaled: ghena?
Me: rouu7y
Khaled: shfeech?
I took a deep breath and replied: mafeeny
He sat down, left the bed and went closer to me..
Khaled: ghena 7e6y 3ainech b3ainy
I raised my eyes to see his..
Khaled: shfeeech!
Me: goul amen
Khaled: ameeen
Me: allah la ya7remny men hal 3youun
He hugged me tight: wala ya7remny menech
The next day..
I woke up early, Khaled was still sleeping..
I took my ipad and started to search about the renal failure..
Khaled: 9aba7 elkhair
I jumped in my place: kharra3tny
He giggled: shda3waa
Me: wallahh
Khaled: sh3endech faz3a ou t6ag6egeen bel ipad?
Me: an6erek tgouumm
Khaled: yallah al7een aqasel ou albes shorty ou entay lebsy mayohech 3ala ma6la3 men el7ammam
Me: okk
Khaled: wella taben netrayyag awal?
Me: la 3ugub a7san
Khaled: okk
I changed into my swimsuit and khaled wore his swimming shorts..
We went to our tiny private beach..
I laid on the beach chair, khaled laid next to me..
He hugged me from the back and started to whisper into my ears..
Khaled: men 4 sneen wana atkhayyal halla7tha
Me: ana ou enta brou7na
Khaled: ou tetwaqe3ain meta beyye elly bekhalleena thalath
I smiled: besmellah
Khaled: elwa7ed mu thamen 3umra ya ghenawy
I froze in my thoughts..
Enqamat galbeee..
What does that mean??
Khaled giggled: shfeech shfeeech kho 7achwaaa
I threw myself on his chest and hugged him tight..
Me: la t3eeed’ha
He hugged me back..
Khaled: allah ya kuber ghalatyyy
Me: welkhafy a3thaamm
Khaled: yabakhtyyy
Me: allah ykhalleek ley bss
Khaled: wekhalleelly elly eb ba6nech
Me giggled: la tafgernaa
Khaled: fake it until you make it haha
Me: enzain enta weddek etha 7amalt a7amel eb bent wella walad?
Khaled: elly eye men allah 7ayyah allah
Me smiled: akeeed bs enta shinu bkha6rek?
Khaled: marrat agouul weddy eb 9bay esheel esmy ou e9eer nafs tafkeery bs marrat agoul abe bnayya 3ashan ashoufech feeha
I couldn’t stop smiling ..
Me: ne3ma enna elwa7ed ekoun 3enda a7ad e7ebba ou elne3ma elly akbar men hathy ena ykoun watheq men 7ubbah lah
Khaled smiled: erte7t
Me: laishh?
Khaled: wathqa men 7ubby!! Hatha a7la shaayyy
Me: shay badeehy a9lan
Khaled: tadreeen? Elkel egoul elma7abba ma tdoum ou tqel ma3a elwagt bs ana ma7es enna halshay yen6ebeq 3alay wallah ghenawy t3arfeen lamma t7ebbeen omech? Shloun entay musta7eel teekreheenha? Hatha shu3oury ma3ach
I kissed his cheek: allah la ya7remnyy
Khaled: ha tabeen netsaba7?
Me: laa ana elyoum bs ba7e6 tan
Khaled: laaa la t7e6een tan
Me: ou laish ma a7e6
Khaled: shlechh bel tan mu zaain lech ba3dain ana a7ebbech chethyy baithaa
Me: 9ej 3ad?
Khaled: shoufay aana met’akked ena kelshay 3alaich 7eluu bs abeech chethy 3ala 6abeee3tech
Me blushed: lak tekraammm
Suddenly I felt his stomach shrinking..
He was feeling pain..
Galbe kan yetga6a3 ma3a kel ahh egoulha..
Bs ma beeedy shay asawweeh..
I hugged him reaaaally tight trying to ignore his ache until it’s stopped..
Me: khaled?
Me: khaleddd
I slowly opened my eyes..
Haw waina?
I noticed his pajama on the ground..
I grabbed it and hanged it up..
Muuustaaa7eeeel e3alleg hdouuuma hal ensaannn!!!!
I tied my hair and went to the bathroom..
Ufffff abeee marra alga elma3jouuuuunn msakkar 3ugbaaa!!!
Ou yetsabba7 bedoun maysakker elsetaraaa el7ammam yerchaakh may bsebbetaaa!!!
3afsa 3afsaaa hal ensaaaannn!!!
I did my job and went outside our room to search for him..
Until I found him standing on the beach..
I went closer to him while saying: KHALED MA A9ADEG SHKETHER ENTA 3AFEEESAAA!! Yaakheee qadder enna weyyak wa7daaa maskeeena msharketek elghuuurfaaa jaaaddd allah y3eeeny 3alaaaaikkk!!!
He turned around and smiled: 9aba7 elward
I noticed a cigarette between his fingers..
My eyes popped out..
TANARFAZTTTT!!!
Maaaa ytouuuuuubbb!!!!
Me: 26 sena ou lail7een mu 3aref ma9la7tek?
He rolled his eyes to see the cigarette..
Khaled: greeb bag6a3
Me: meta greeeb ya khaled metaaaa??? Lamma etekawwad 3alaik el amraaath?? Ethaaak merkhe9 bnaffsek tara feee nas t3ezhaa ou mu meste3eda takhserha
He threw his cigarette and smiled: a7ebech
Me: khaled pleaseeee ana akalmek jaaaddd
I took few steps toward me and hugged me tight..
He said while rubbing my back: la t7ateeen
And all of a sudden my eyes started to tear heavily..
Me: eg6a3haa al7eeen ou mara7 a7aaateee
Khaled: 7ayaaateee laish tabcheen al7eeen shebaaachhyyy
Me: ga3da ashouuufek tmouuuut jeddamy ou tabeeny ath7aaak
Khaled: laaish yubaaa ana mafeeny shay min gallech eny mareethhh!!!
I know everythinggggg my deaaarrrr!!!!!!
Me: kel zegara etdakhenha etqallel men 3umrek khames degayeg
Khaled: baseee6a khames degayeggg
Me: wallah luw thaaanyaa maaaaaaabeeee!!
Khaled: 3uuumry entay enshallah bag6a3 bs khala9 la tabcheeen 3awarty galbe taraaach
And he started to wipe my tears by his rough hands..
Khaled: yallah yuba ghasly wayhech ou emshay netsabba7
Me: ok
We changed to our swimsuit and jumped inside the sea..
We enjoyed our time and I totally forgot about his illness ou finaaally I felt the honeymoon moments..
He was hugging me from the back..
Khaled: sha3rech lemballal brou7a qe9aaaa
I smiled: 3ayall many 6al3a men elba7aarrr
Khaled: ahhhhh ya ghenawy elwagt ma3aaaach lah ma3naaa
Me: ou elwagt ma3aaak asraaa3 men charger vin diesel
Khaled giggled: bagoulech shay egarge3 bgalbe men sneeeeeeen
I turned around: gouuuul
Khaled: Eeee chethyyy elwa7ed e3aref esoulefff chan lafaitay menzemaan
Me shyly: walaht 3ala wyaihek chan alef
Khaled: tadreeen eny kent atmanna atzawwaj wa7da esemha dinaaaa
Me: shma3naaa??
Khaled: ma tet9awerain shloun a3sheg hal esemmm!!
Me: aghaarrr
Khaled: eyyeeech el7achyyy
Me: gharred fee sema sam3y abee ta7ky ou ta6rebny
Suddenly he kissed my cheak and screamed: YAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEN ELMEN6ARBEEEEEEEEEEEEEN
I giggled in a shyly way: kammel
Khaled: sheftech ou 7abaitech ou kent atmanna enna esmech ekoun dina bsss youm 3araft enech ghena gelt wesh jab elgumar 7ag elnejouuuuum
Me: karaht esem dina?
Khaled: la ma karahta bs 7abait esem ghina akthaaarr
I smiled: ou shloun luw kent ghena ou om dina?
He grinned: ayabaaaaaaaa
Me: gouuul tamm
He pulled me closer to his chest and hugged me the tightest hug everrrr..
Me: shouuuf ana badesh el7ammam atsabba7 gablek lanna raightek tnarfezznyyyy
Khaled kan mendemej eb his mobile: ma 6alabtay elly 3ezzech
I smiled: shukran
I grabbed my towel and went to the bathroom..
I took a long warm shower and went out of the bathroom to dry my hair and let khaled came in to take a shower..
I opened the door to hear that weird voice..
It was more like moaning..
I froze in my place..
It was khaled’s voice..
My heart’s beats accelerated..
My body started to shiver..
Khaled: 3umaaarr many gaderrrr many gader men el3awaaarrrrr
He was crying!!!!!
That MAN was crying!!!!!
Khaled: kelyouuuuum ezeeeeed gemt magdar at7ammelaaaa!! Merty bedat tsheeekk!!!
My eyes couldn’t stop tearing..
Khaled: areddd wanaaa tawnii thaleth youm shahr 3asaaal!!
Khaled: adry walla adry bs 7araaam hal maskeeena thawwagt’ha elthaaaimm mabe athaweg’ha akthar 3umar efhamnyy!!
Khaled: madry madry ew9efly musakken ayshaaay
I went back to the bathroom and cried my heart out..
It was the first time seeing him crying..
Awwal marra he showed his weakness!!!!!
Elly sheftaaaa mesaaa3 muu khaledddd ensaaan thaanyyy!!!
He was crying like a child!!!!
His voice was repeated over and over in my mind!!!
I stayed in the bathroom 30 more minutes and I couldn’t get over his scenery..
Until he knocked the door..
Khaled: ghenawi? Feech shay? Chennech 6awwaltay?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kel hatha 3ashan ma ykharre3nyyy!!
Me: degega wa6la3
I went out..
Khaled: na3eeman
My face was emotionless..
Me: yen3am b7alek
I was trying to avoid his gazes..
I quickly took the hair dryer and started to dry my hair and he went inside the bathroom..
After minutes he went out..
Me: eljazeera sgheera ou malaina mafeeha shay tesaba7na ou rekabna qareb ou kelshay sawaina I think its time to go back to Kuwait
Khaled: tmelleen wana weyach?
Me: mu 3an bs ham walaht 3ala obouy
Khaled: besmellah ma mdaaa!! Hatha wentay darsa barra! Ou warana faransa la tensain
Me: mabe faransaaaaa!!!
Khaled: weyay betkoun ghair 9adgeeny
Me: khaled bared lekwait
Khaled: EEE LAISHH!!
And all of a sudden he fell down and screamed: AAAAAAAHHHHH
Me: 3ashaaan chethyyyyyyyy
Khaled was moaning loudly..
I couldn’t hold the scenery and I ran to the reception and asked them for an ambulance..
I was nervous madry shasaaawwyy!!
The ambulance came and took him to the closest hospital..
They told me that he has a serious problem in his kidney and they should do the surgery as soon as possible..
I was too afraid because I was alone and I don’t know what to do so I told my father about everything and he asked for a private jet to take khaled back to Kuwait to do the surgery..
I was too afraid from losing him..
Yaraab la tafje3ny bwafata gably yaraab 6awwel b3umraaa..
We9alna lekwait ou waddaw khaled elmustashfa direct..
Ma gelna 7ag ahala 3ashan ma nkhare3hum bs elwa7eed elly gelnalla 3umar his cousin lanna yadry 3an kelshay..
I couldn’t sleep a second ..
Two days passed and I couldn’t stop thinking of his surgery ..
Ou kel amaly ballah ennha tenja7 ou artaaa7..
The surgery took hours..
I was waiting outside waiting for the happy news..
My dad was with me..
I was trying to avoid the negative thoughts..
Me: mu cheenna 6awalaw?
Dad: ed3ay ed3ay ya bnaytee
I nodded..
My throat became drier than ever..
Yaraabbb ered nafs gabel ou a7saaan yaraabb la tkhalleny afgeda..
Rouuu7y t3allegat feeeh shloun bet3eeesh bedounaah!!!
And all of a sudden the door’s opened..
The doctor went out..
My dad and I didn’t say a word..
We were too weak to talk..
The doctor: entaw ahal elmareeth khaled?
We nodded..
The doctor: el7emdellah el3amaleya nja7at ne6roh lain ye97a men elbanj
I huge smile was drawn on my face and litters of happiness tears were falling down my cheeks..
Me: EL7EMDELLAH!!
My dad hugged me tight: alfff 7amd ou shukerrrr
Both of us sejadna sajdat shuker ou ga3adna nan6er e6al3ouun khaled..
….
Khaled raddatla 9e7eta ou he quit smoking AKHEERAAN..
7ayaatna 9araat wayed a7san ou a7laaa el7emdellah ra7at kel elmashakel ella mushkela wa7daaa..
Ana ou khaled bethab6 kel youm housha 3ala 3afsetaaaa!!
Ana aratteb ou ohwa y3affesss!!
Bs kelshaaaaaay ehoiuuuuun madama eb 9e77a ou 3afyaaah..
After two years yebna Dinaaa ..
She became my LIFEEE!!
She looked exactly like my mom and that’s a pleasureee!!!
A7es’ha juz’ mennyy ou shay yejma3ni bkhaaaledddd!!!
Me: dandouuuna 7abeeebeeee 7abeeebbb galbeeee .. mamaaa gouly mamaaa
Khaled: ghenaawy
Me: sam
Khaled: zahbe jan6etech benrou7 paris next week
Me: nightmare muuu parisss!! Mabe gelnaaa mabeeee
Khaled: neyyetee nkammel derasatna hnak yemeee3! 7araam 3endech majestair ma wgefat 3ala dektorahh
Me: tadreee eny ma7ebha wala a7eb elly feeha ou mu lazem akamel
Khaled: ely feeha? Abashrech emsekaw 3alaih shay ou ga6ouh bel sejen
Me: E7LEFFF!! A7MEDO BEL SEJEN?
Khaled smiled: sejen faransa el agshaaar
We went to France together with our Dina..
Kammalna derasatna ou 9erna dekatra el7emdellah ou bnafs el department b KU..
Ashoufa bel dawam wel bait shinu abe akthaar..
Marait bwayed thurouuuf 9a3ba..
Yemkn luw enqa9at eb film gaalaw film hindy..
Bas ekteshaft enna el9aber mefta7 elfaraaj..
Ou sheft enna Allah sub7anah etha a36a ad’hashh..
3a6any ely a7ebba ou 3a6any elbent ely a7lem feeha ou fakny men kel mushkela b7ayateee..
Sawait aghla6 b7ayatee ou kel ensan yaghle6..
Welly yaghle6 yakheth jezata bdenyeta aw akhreta..
Bs elly etoub allah y3awtha y3awtha y3awtha ..
Khaled: dinaaaa

Dina: a7ebbekk

I giggled: aghaaaaar

Khaled: darrabt’ha 3adel wala mathalletech

Me: etha ehya t7ebbekk anaaa

Khaled: entay shinuu?

Me: dinaaa

Dina: amouut alaich

Khaled laughed so hard: e7na kafu yahel e7na??

29 comments:

  1. What a post! happy endings.. Love it wallah cant describe how much it is amazing and i cant !!! madre shagoulech im speechless at the moment! Allah y36eech el3afyaa w teslaam eedchh pretty 3alaa hal qe9aa elraaaw3aaaaaaa!!!!!! lovellyylovelyy wallah ana wddyy aktb bas 1000000000000 kaalmaaa ma taakfeee!!! i dont know what to say now tawne graaait hal post eljameeel :'(((((((((((( woowwowoowowowowowowow. mashallahh 3aalaaaichh;** -258264

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  2. ENTAAAAAAY 3AAAAAJEEEEBAA W YOUUR BLOOG 3AAAAJEEEEB NAAAFSICH☹♥!!!!!! Amaaazing ending♥♥!!! I LOOOVE YOUUR BLOOOG W I LOOOVE YOUU MOOREE♥♥!!!! Allaah ya7fethich w ywafgech♥♥ -H

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  3. bada3aw belbent=)) jad ya36ech el3afya ta3abtay wayed 3aleha wmashkoura wyakhte both of them yshawgun:(
    ashwa enech 7a6etay happy ending,law mu happy ending chan i won't comment haha::
    ily<3-m

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  4. I AMMMMMM INNNNNN TEAAAAAAARRRRRSSSS!!!! *sniff* *sniff*
    SHINUUUUUU HALZAIINNNN????
    SHINUUUUUU HAAALPOST EL3AJEEEBBBB?????
    SHINUUUUUU HAALENDING!!!!!


    GOULAAYYY AMEEENNN ALLAAHH YARZGNYY WYACHHHHHH METHIL KHALID OUU A7SAN MENAA B3D:')!
    HE IS THE CUTEST GUY AAAAAAAA:')
    EL7AMDILLAAHHHHHHHH EL3AMALYAAAA ENJEEE7777777AAATTT WAYYYYYY GALBYYYYY KANNNNN 3ENDYYY E7SAS ENAA BEMOUT OUUUU BTSAWEN SAD ENDING!!! BS THALAMTICHHHHHHHHHH:') A7BIIIIICHHHH!
    WAAAAYYYY A7SSSSS BABY DINAA IS THE CUTEST:( BABCHYY I WANT A BABYYYY:(



    WAITINGGGG NEXXXXXT STORYYYY 3LAA NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR ♥♥

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  5. Yakhteee 3laichhh entayyy o postatichhhh;* etyanen!
    ilkalemat .. iljumal .. il7achy .. everything everything is unique! mashallaahh! tabeen il9ij? my favorite two blogs entay ouu bint khaltich to be honest:::: a7eeeeebbb eshlounnn etbad3oun everything is unique mashallaahh! wla blogat halwagt? kilhum copy paste mnn ba3thh ou film hindyyyyy o egouluunnn ilqisa 9ijyya:::: bikhte9ar? entaw 3ajeben etshawgounnn! i never talked to youuu bs a7essichhh etwansin so mafrouth kil your friends and family yashkroun rabhum w ya7medouna kilyoummm eniiichhhhh m3ahummm!! ♥♥ ghayrhummm yetmanounn yg3doun m3ach la7tha hehe:( and i know you will show this to your friends so SAAALLLLAAMMMMM LAMLAMM FRIENDS A7EBKUMMM O YOU GUYS ARE LUCKY TO HAVE HER!!! hehehehehe::::::: akthar shyyyyy metshawga 7aggaa your new storyyy 3ad a7bich lmannn taktben 3ann ilteenagers o i heard enich btaktbeen 3n teenagers so i'm EXCITEDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!




    a7bich ya 7ilwa ;*

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  6. waaaayyyyyyyyyy soooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee laammmmouuy soooo cuteeee<3<3

    tslamle anamlech althahabeyaa al3ajeebaa al.ambeee ;(<3

    bchetena m3ach.. tha7aktena m3ach..wanastena w thayagtena m3ach.. 3ayashtena kel la7tha 9arat m3ahom.. 7sastena ena ohma jdamna..

    y36ech alf malyoun trelion zelion belion 3afya 3la alposts w 3la al.story al amazing al.akthar mnn amazing at3ab w ana agoul amazing mnn awl post lel7en amazing<3

    a7biiich wayed wayed wayedd..will miss you 7ail 7ail*KHANGATNE AL3ABRA*

    By alnezgha ely kela t9ed bdleyatech :washiyb98

    ILY

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  7. ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAH 3ALIIICHHHH ALLLLLLLAAAAAAAH!!!! A7LA HAPPY ENDING EB 7AYATIIIII W A7LAAAAAAAAAAAAA POOOOSSTTT EB HAL STORY LOOOOOOOVEEEDDDDD THE POST&STORY&THE'WRITER AND E V R E Y S I N G L E THING IN THE STORY PLEEEAAAAASSSEE YAAAA KATKOOTA KTBAAYY BA3AD!!!!!! W KHALIIDD EYAAANEEEN W GHENAA BA3D!!!!! THANK YOU 3ALA KL SHAY!!!!!!!! WALLAAH YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!! LOOOVVVVVEEEE YOOOOUUUU GUURRL!!!!!!!! -COOKIE

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  8. LLOOOOVVVEEEEDDD TTTHHEEEE PPPOOSTTTT 777AAIIILLL teeslaam eiideech wallah w thankyou for youur timee awal mara agrraa rewaya w andmeej feha w az3aal etha z3law w abche 3alaiha w etha stansaww astanes m3ahum w abtsem chiny mynouna brou7yy jad loved itt w waitingg ydedech inshallah la tnsainna w thankyouuu<33333!!!!

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  9. Perfeeeccct endiiing loved itttt waiting next story loveyaa♡

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  10. i loved the ending AMAZING, dm3aat 3aine 7ata ... Allah ykhlekm lb3th btw waiting the next storyyyy 3la NAAAAR ily ;**

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  11. What an AMAZING ending! You wrapped it up perfectly <3 We can't wait for the next story, they're always astonishing! Dina is super cute <3!!!

    Lots of Love
    Xxxxx

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  12. Perfect perfect perfect!
    Ygouluuun makuu a7ad beldnya perfect, ana agoulech as a writer?
    YOU ARE PERFECT!
    You have writing skills
    Amazing creative ideas
    Unique stories
    eb aghla6ich? hammm you ARE perfect!
    I loved the ending, I almost cried:')!
    Dina is the cutest baby ever:(:(
    Jad your stories, CREATIVE CREATIVE CREATIVE!!!
    Tabeen il9ra7a? YOU should write a novel, a real one!!
    You deserve to be a writer, jad mubde3a ouuu 3endich afkarrr narrr!!!

    That's all, I love youuu!

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  13. Waaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyy abyyyyy dinaaa:( a9laaannn mnuuu gal eniii ge3adt abchiiiii ouu agoul aby dinaa ouu omii mekhtar3a?:::::::: waaayyy etyanninnnnn:') allahhh yarzegny b3dain etha tzwajt:(::::::::::: I love you! sema3t your next story is going to be about teenager:o? 7adddyyyyyyyyyy metshawga! can't wait :'(

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  14. What a happy ending:( -I'm writing from my mobile so ignore any mistakes:$- t 7 m s t lelg9a eljaya!:c so that's whyyy I commented menhaaa afathfeth 3n blogik w menhaaaa 3shann anfeth elcomment bar=)))) anyway Khalid is cuteeeeeeeeee:o bssss gaharni lmaaaa gal elmar2a nag9aaaa:(:( I meannnn mnnnn jda ygouuul lzoujtaaaa ke4aaaa? Second thinggggggg DINNNANAAAAAAA IS TO DIE FORRRR YA5TEEE:') cuteeeee bzyaddaaa:(:( whwh:( amannaaa nzlyyyy the next storyyy as soon as you cann:(

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  15. TESSLLLLAAMMMLLYYYYY EDICHHH 3LA HALSTORYYYYY ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ 3AJEBBBBBAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  16. Elgummmmaarrrrrrr nazelat post 3 days ago o akher post o annnnnaaa aakheerrr mannnnya3lammm:o? I'll read it and come to comment;*;*

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  17. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA hello lamloomaaa its ayoush!!! min zmaaan ma sheftay my comments bs l2ana emte7anat w tadren kilyoum shay bs lyoum ma gdart an6r so garaita ooENTAY WL STORY SHAY KHAYAAAAAL!!! amout 3alaich w 3ala ur posts <33 ADORE YOU KEEP GOING!!! lich mustaqbaal GD LUCK

    -ayoush ;*

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  18. OMG radet garet last post !!!! wallaah a7laa endingggg tbachiii <3 <3 :'( entaaaay AMAZIINNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE YOUUUUU
    -ayoush again ;p

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  19. THE LAST PART MADE ME CRRRYYYY!
    KHALED ZOUUUUUUUUQAAAA O GHENA AZWAAAQ O BENT'HUMMM AAA YAAA BENT'HUMMMM WAYYY ETYANIN CUTEEEE!!! :'( ELSTORY 3 A J E E B A!!!!!!! I LOVED IT! PERFECT! Y3NI LAMLAMMMM TAKTEBB SHYY O MY9EIR PERFECT? MA3QOULA?????????????? we're waiting next chapter 3la JAMMMMMER

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  20. I know it's a late comment, but yeah at least I wrote one ;$!
    Hmm I was looking for words to describe this amazing story or to describe how amazing you are; but because you and your stories are so indescribable, words couldn't describe you. I read this chapter over and over and over, every time I read it, I like it even more, I smile wider. You're much better than others, not less than them even with a bit.

    P.S: I love you to the moon and back <3

    -DeeAyy

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  21. All I wanted to say, I loved your way belketaba! it's unique madry! tadreen? do you remember elblog elthany elle sawaiteh? ouu sakarteh? yeah mnnn awal magrait gilt laish tqaled esloub lamaa::::: b3dainnn you told us ena entayyy swaiteh! bs jad it's special♥♥ your blog kila unique! wain t7a9leeen al7een blogat creative? maku! awal kint agra foug 20+ blog! bs al7eennn ekteshaft maku salfa! bs blogich ghair!!!!♥♥ al7een I just read yours and three more! I'm dying to read the new story, TOO excited for that! please post it as soon as you can 6alabtich:( ya 7laaat'ha dinnaaa yakhteee:::::: etyanin wdy akelha ouu annaa mu shayfat'ha::::: the last part made me smile!♥ Just a perfect family. ♥

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  22. QUUUUUUWAAAAA;$ hahahhaahaa;$banfeth lich elcomment anaaa<3<3
    3ady akheth dinawwyyyy yoummmm ouu aredha? she's too cute!
    Khalid e7erni wayed bs ham manegdar 3laihh hathaaa elba6al::: ou ghenawy takser kha6ri always, a7medo belsejen? KOLOLOLOLOLOLOLISSHHHHHHHHH AKHEEERRAAANNNNN? WAI3 A9LAANN LAWWWW MUUUUU MDAKHLENA ELSEJJEN CHAN ANA GETALTA YA AKHE E77777EEEEEERRR :'(!!!

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  23. alaaaaaa a7laaa happy ending♡♡♡♡♡
    katkooooot jaaaad jaaad entaaaay 3AJEEEEEBA ♡♡♡
    ma tet9awerain shkether a7eeeeebich mashallaa tdesheneen elgalb rabi ewafgech eb 7ayatech Oo derastech Oo yaaaa raaaaaab yejma3na bel janaaaa walaaa wedi ashoofech :(
    Oo 7adeeeee a7ib your blog + stories mashalla t3arfeeen shlon tshawgeena Oo tkhaleeena nan6er 3alaa nar
    Oo sam7eeeena ethaa az3ajnaaach eb 7anatna aw lahainach 3an derastich Oo 7adeeech mashkoooora lanich tkhasiseen men waktech 7agna ♡♡♡♡♡
    *N*

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  24. The sneak peek killed me inzain? The fact that you're posting after 7'9rat jannnaaabbb your readers elbardeennn yaktbounn post is killing me too! Knowing that they're too lazy to write just one comment is killing me too! Khalaaa9 ketbaw comments jad malaaaaiiiiiit ouuuuu annaaaa ant'theerrr khalaaa9 wallaaa I want the new storyyy:'(

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  25. First off all, I'm typing this from my mobile so ignore any mistakes. Shagouuul o shakhaleee? Shakteb o shlounnn abdaaa? Agulichhhh 7bait your blog mnn shakh9etich? Wla agouulich 7bait your blog from your creative mind mashallaahhh? Wla agouuulich 7bait your blog mn qesasich elydeeda? Jad a7s lich mustaqbal.. I mean YOU should write a book! O m3arabb laishhh laaaaa?:::: 9adgenyyyyy by9eeerrrr elketab NAAARRR::: o annaaa awaaaal mnnnn yd3mich o yashtry elketab 3ad 7zat'ha makuuuuu comments w madryyyy shinuuu::: atghashmarrr::: bssss ze3alt:( shinuuuu hathhhhhha maaaaa9artttt:( a7bich o a7b your blog bsssss laishhhh wayyeeeddd ta'khrtayyyyy o ma nzltay your new story:(? Tadreennnn 3ady abchyyy? IM EXCITED btgulen way chathabaaa hathyyy ma3endahhaa salfaaa bssss mnnnnn 9ijy! Lw a3br mnmnn elyounmm lbacheerrrr 3nnnn blogich marraaaa7 awgeffff!!!!! A7biichhhhh w nzlayyy 5la9 3aaaddd:')

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  26. Ok ana a3jaz ma khallag rabe w i love your blog w elshkr lmy friend 7anat 3layyy ellaaa taktbeenn comment=)) I'm Saudi bs bakteb belkuwaity because I LOVE YOUR ACCENT :(:( whhhhhh marraa 7luuu:( I wish i had a Kuwaity friend bs 3indy blclass a friend half Saudi half Kuwaity tshaaweeeggg=))<3 amz7 maraa a7bbb lma tetkalamm w lma ng3d m3ha askt elkl w a5leha tetkalam because her accent yjeeb el3afy:( anyway ha4a mu my comment haha=))) A 7 B K W A7BBB YOURR STORYY MASHALLAAHH MASHALLAAHH magd a7ad galkk enk td5leen elgalb bsr3a? w sha59ytik is to day for? mashallaahhhh mashallaahh=))<3 a7s lw asoulf m3k musta7eel amel :(<3 I LOVEEEE YOOUUUUU:$ w mashallaaahh you're beautiful mashallaah:$<3 allah y5leekk lna w l2hlkkk w a7babkkk<3 w now njy lelstory adry marraa 6wlt bs hehe I have a lot of things to say:( mn youmm ma jbty 6ary el3amalya w glt 5la9 sad ending w skrt elpage w trktahh w b3den jany a7ad gal omg shftyyy DINAA MARAA CUTE! w agouuul meeen Dina laykoun nazlty new story:o w aft7ah w algaa the cutest baby in the world Dinaa<3 whhhh yaaa galbee cutee:(<3 w Khalid & Ghena is the cutest couple! w bs:$ thank you 3la elstory eljamela mt7msen lelstory elle b3daha 3ad la t6awleen ya jamela:$

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  27. Lam lam:( bde elnew story ya nar ya shraaaaar ya 9aroukh:( pleaseeee luuuya:(? I lovee you cha chaaaa:( bye 7abeb albe tra iloveyou:( wajd wajddd

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  28. YAAAAAAAY HATGA ELSHAY BEKOUJ PERFEEEEEEEECTTTT 7AAAG MUSALSAAAAL!! 3AJEEEEEEEEEB-ADALLLLALLLALAJASSNJ

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