Monday, May 9, 2016

The smile of my life.. Part17

Othman started to wipe basma's tears using his qetraa..

Othman: 7ayaaateee 3umri entay ana hny 3ndechh!!!

Basma took a step backward and started to wipe her tears herself: sorry sorry sam7ny getlek 3ethmany nesait nafsy

Othman gave basma a wondered stare: asaam7ech 3ala shinu!! Basma ana 11 sena metshafeg asma3 halkelma mennech men 9ejjech!!! Kellaaa ensy naaafsechhh!!!

Basma: la 3ethmaan laaa mu men 7aggy elkelma men 7ag mertek, noura!

Othman: basmaa! 6alabtech la t7e6een masafaat!!

Basma: shloun ma7e6 3ethmaaan!!! Mu anaa ely akharreb byouuut!! Luw enha 3elaqa mu zawaj chaaan kharaaabt'ha chaan ge6a3t'ha min 3erjhaaa!!! Bs hatha zawaaj maagdaar!!

Othman: ok 7e6y 7awajez bs mu al7een basma ana walhaaann mu wagtech 7awajez ou kalam faathy!!

Basma: khalny a7e6 7awajez dam eny gadra!! La'anna en ga3adt ma3ak degega zyada bat3allagg!!

He ignored her sentence and held her hand and pulled her to sit down the bench and he sat next to her..

He removed her front hair behind her ear..

Othman: basma!! Mu m9addeg ennech ga3da jeddamy!! Mu m9adeg enech mba6la 3yonech ou t6al3eeny ou tesme3eeny!!

She did not split a word..

Othman: basoma!! A7ebechhhh!! Waayed a7ebch!! Wayeddd!!

She smiled: waaydek neg6a men waydy

He giggled: la ana omy da3yaatly!!

Basma: ma faragt 3alaik 3ugb el ghaybooba?

Othman smiled: ghalaitay b3ainy zyada!! Ou jamalech ma nega9 ella zaaad!! Kan 3ndech cham 7abba hny *he pointed on her forehead* bs ra7aw!! 

She giggled: wai3 3ethmaan

Othman giggled: elzebda enna ana mestanes ok?

She smiled: 3ethman?

Othman: 3youn 3ethman! 

Basma in a hesitating tone: 3ayyalt?

Othman's heart skipped a beat..

He rolled his eyes to see the ground: la

Basma: ya3ni! Sorry, bs.. Ya3ni adry mu men 7aggy bss 

Othman: basma ekhthy ra7tech!!!

Basma: fee majaal?

Othman nodded: bs waaallah ya basma enna ma7ad khatha mukanech bgaalbe! 9ej eny makent metkhayel eny akheth ghairch bs tadreeenn

Basma interrupted him: men 7aggek! Men 7agek ou 7aag .. Mertek.. A9lan madrry laish sa'alt halsu'aal madry shelfayda menna!! Akh! Ok ana lazem amshy!! 

Othman: basoma!!

Basma: na3am?

Othman: sam7eenyy!!

She rolled her eyes to meet his..

Othman: yebt lech ham enty bghina 3anna! Ana ely bedait el3elaqa!! Khalaitech eta3alegainn ou tezawajt ghairech! 

Basma faked a smile: la 3ady!

She turned around and started to cry so hard!!!

She felt that its farewell!! 

No more Othman in her life!!!

"A7taaj ay shay ywannes galbe!!! 3ala kether ma kanat bedayat shofat 3ethman sa3ada 3ala kether ma kanat nehayat'ha theega ou haaam!!"

She rushed to her car and went back home..

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Basma: adry mu wagty bs abe ashoofech tharoory please khesheelly luw ne9 sa3a!! Lujain walla madry shasawy b3umry!!

Lujain: basmo men 9ejech? Keelly lech!!! Shfeeech khara3teeny ta7achaay!!

Basma: 3ady ashofech ba3dain agolech?

Lujain: akeed! Al7een ayeech wainech feeh?

Basma: radda elbait teyen baitna?

Lujain: la fashla akhaf ghadakum!! Khala9 amerech ou rekby ma3ay belsayyara

Basma: ok na6retech!!

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Othman: hala noura!

Noura: wainek 9arly sena adeg matred!! Khara3tny!

Othman: rad bel6ereej!!

Noura: ok 3ala wa3adna? Please maw3dy elsa3a 3

Othman: enshallah!

Noura: ok bye!

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Basma: Lujain tadreen ana shinu shu3ooury? Shu3our wa7da ga9 3alaiha kha6eebhaa!!! Laaa tloumeeeny entaw etshofouna shay wana ashofa shay thaany!! Ana benesba ley elmawthoo3 9ar btharf shahar!!! 

Lujain: ana weyach basom! 9ej ya3ni theegat khelgg!! Ou entay gabel la tdesheen elghayboba kentay wayed greeeba min elzawaj ou faj'a tgomeen ela oho metzawej ghairech abadan ma alomech bs abeech t7e6een shay eb balech shaghla

Basma: shinu!

Lujain: 6oul ma entay tkalmeen 3ethman wetshofeena entay ga3da tkharbeen baitaa ou adry enech matabeen halshay e9eer!!

Basma's eyes filled with tears: lujain ana ely enkharab baity!!! Adry ena elwaqe3 ghair bs wallal3atheem ga3da a7es ena noura ely kharebat baity ou khathat 3ethman menny!!! Lujain etha 3ethman 11 sena ma gedar yensany!! Ana 100 sena ma tkafeeny ansah!! 

Lujain: allah be3eenech enshallah ou btnsaina ou byakhthech elly yestaahlech 

Basma: lujain a7ebba!!

Lujain: 7etana a7ebba!! Bs ma atzaweja la'anna okhouy!! Entay e3tabreeh okhouchh

Basma: lujain la tyaneneeeny!! A7ebba aghaaaar 3alaaaihhh abe bs 7agggy!!! Abe kalama el7elu ma yengal ella ley!!!

Lujain: basma tra merta 7amel!! Ely ga3da tfakreeen feeh wayed ghala6!!!

Basma laid her head back on the seat..

She sighed: aaaaakhh!! Yaraby t3eeny 3ala haldenya ely a7es maly mukaan feehaaa

Lujain: haw latgoleeen chethy!!! Elmukan kella lech!!

Basma: redeeny elbait!

Lujain: shrayech nroo7 el salon tsaween sha3rech ou te9begheen tetghayar nafseetech

Basma: sorry bs kelesh mu wagta

Lujain: 3ala ra7tech

Basma gasped: abaaaaaih lujain 6a3y hathy tdaaakhen!!!!!!!

Lujain smiled: waaaih 3ady ya ketherhum!!

Basma: kelesh muuu 3aaady!!! Min meta banaaat ydakhnooon!! Ou ashkara 3ainy 3ainek wehy tsoog!!!

Lujain: ya3ni shinu tabeeny asawy basoma? As7ab zegarat'ha wagolaha 3aib?

Basma: laaa bs 3alaqal estankeray!!

Lujain: min kether ma sheft hal manthar ta3awadt 3alaih!!

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Othman: noura bagolech shayy

Noura: goul

Othman: shrayech hal baby ana asammeeh? 

Noura: la shouf etha walad ana ou etha bnt enta!! Mu 3n shay bs bkha6ry asammy 3ala obouy!!

Othman: nezlay nezlay

Noura: haw laishhh

Othman: we9alna ba3ad laish

Noura: ou ent?

Othman: bashof masfa6 wal7egech

Noura: 3ady nshoof yemee3

Othman: noura maw3edech bedaa!!

Noura: okk!!

Othman does not want to leave his car!!

He's not brave enough to hear the result..

"Mestanes enny ba9eer obo!! Bs shay wa7ed mnaqe9 far7ety!! Musta7eeel anady noura om yousif!!! Musta7eeel elnas tnadeha om yousif ou basma t6ale3!!!"

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The dr.: alf mabrouuk mbayyen walad!!


15 comments:

  1. YAAAAAA ALAAAAAAAAAAH ���������� eshtabeeee eshtabe way3 noura zain akrahhaaaaaaaaa 3ouuuuu3

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    1. Put urself in her place then say whether u hate her or not -,-

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    2. Mn jd!!!!!!!!

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    3. yes i will hate myself haha;p

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    4. Wa3alaaaggaa halnouuuraa:::::!! loool ena you will hate yourself 7adech faaair😂❤️

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  2. Uffff nouuraa ewww! I hate her💔

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  3. abai abaiihh a7eb basoumaaaaaa

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  4. bas 7aram noura wayed ma3wra galbee matstahel!

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  5. I don't like the idea of basma being heartbroken but i know you're a really good writer and would let us have a good ending 9a7? 9a7. if u dont kill noura madre shbasawe fech wallah. ma tswa manabeha haltbn. wallah shno ehya ely m5rba bait 3thman w basma.. ehya maleha thanb enzain bas shwayat karama!! mayabech 7saay chanch ma 3ndch e7sas ana a5alech t7seen!!! ufff.. elmhm bas 9j y36ech el3afya elqe9a wayd tshawg.. nadr tlgain qe9a u cant think shnu mmkn e9er next, w qe9etch mn halqe9a9.. manadre erd basma wla ekalm noura w ekaml 7ayata wla shnu blthab6!! 7ayaartenaaa!! w halshay emayz elqe9a akeed!! keep goingg yal7lwaa! tslam el ayade...

    -elsemeya ;)

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    1. Akeeeddd nobody wants himself to be heartbroken:::!! Akeeed enshallah elkel t3jebaaa❤️❤️❤️!! Lla magdar athba7ha ba3dain e'anebny thameeery!!! Bs ehy shdarraha matadry 3n shaay!!! Ay karaamaa matadry 3n wala shaay!! Allaaah y3afeeechhhh!! Wanaaasaaaa!!! Enshallah will dooo❤️❤️

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