Monday, January 28, 2013

Its crystal clear .. Part20

1- THANKYOU FOR THE AMAAAZING COMMMENTS WALLAH WANASTOUNI<33!!


2- This post is dedicated to LOVELY Arwa Alzayeddd I loooove you so much ou sam7eeny ya el dedication met'akher<3

3- weddy i dedicate this post 7g kell elly sawwaw comment eb chapter 19 ella wa7da 3arfa nafs'ha LOOL bs wallah i really appreciate them ou enshallah i dedicate you the next posts;*





I threw myself on my dad’s chest and hugged him tight ..
Many m9aadgaaaa!!!
Dad: akhaaf ma kentay bghaybouba 7azzat’ha?
I laughed really hard and pulled myself away ..
Me smiled: ok shesma?
Dad: Khaled alflani
I couldn’t stop laughing men elwanasa ..
Me: welne3em!
Dad: t3arfeena?
Me: weyay beljam3a
Dad: eee chethy elsalfaa?
Me smiled: eeh!
Dad: ok etha dag marra thanya a36y raqam khaltech mona 3ashan tetfaham ma3a omah shrayech?
Me: khala9 ok
Dad: ghena?
Me: hala
Dad: meta betkouneen bel bait?
Me: akhalle9 el lesson ou ared laish?
Dad: ya3ni 3al sa3a cham?
Me: em 8 maybe?
Dad: ok
Me: laish?
Dad: 3ashan nour ekhtech ma teg3ad brou7ha
Me: ee enshallah la reja3t ba6al3ha
Dad: ee zain tsaween, gelty 7g elsayeq ye6la3?
Me: ee barra yan6erny
Dad: zain!
Me: ma3assalam
I went to KRC ..
I did well, 9ej lai galaw elnafseya tsawwy sheghel!!
A7es weddy anaaagez men elfar7aaa!!!
I went back home at 7:30 ..
Dad: ha shloun el lesson?
Me: 7aaadda 3ajeeeb kelshay sawaita 9a7 men awwal mara elmudarreb wayed mkayyef 3alay elyoum!
Dad: hatha el3asham feech! Yallah baba badlay bakhthech entay ou nour a6ale3kum
Me: waaain?
Dad: mufaja’a!
Me: CUTEE!! Ok 3a6ny 5 minutes
Dad: yallah ou nady nour ana gayelllaha tbadel
Me: ok
Me: AYSHAYYYY???
Dad: nezlaay!
Me: BTESHTEREELLY SAYYARA YEDEDA??
Dad: hadeyyat takharujech testahlain!
I grinned ..
Me: waaaaaaaaay a7ebek wallaaahhh!!!
Nour: 3ashan malech 3ether ou e6al3een akhaytech
Me: men 3youuuuni!
I chose a black range sport ..
My dad took us to bubu restaurant after elwekala ..
We had a great time together ..
Menzeman ma 6ala3na weyya ba3ath bs 7asafa 3abdalah nage9na 6ab3an kan ma3a rab3a ..
That night I couldn’t sleep I was thinking of Khaled ..
A7es abee adeg 3alaaaiihh!!
Bs meftashla lanna last phone call between us kanat thaaaaimmm!!
Bss waaaaaay im the happiest person alive JAAD!
“Hanouuny hannouny ya nas hanouny 7abeeeeby raje3ly ou btefra7 3youni”
My mobile was ringing ..
Eff yallah 9eba7 khair ..
I was searching for my phone ..
OMG .. OMG OMG IT’S A TANGO CALL!!
Waaaay wainnnaa!!!
Finally I found it under my bed sheet ..
The tango call was from Khaled!!!!!!
I MIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!
Way waayhe mtaffaakhhh!!
I picked it up but without opening my camera ..
THAT FAAAAAACEE!!!!!!
Khaled: ghenaaa!!
Me: a7ebbekk!!
Khaled: mumkin ashouf manthar 7eluu?
Me: not available at the moment hahaha
Khaled: walhaaaan!!
Me: wayhe mtaffakhh!
Khaled: bekoun a7la manthar abdy fee youmy!
Me: 9adegny laa!!
Khaled: la ta7remeeny!
Me: shemga3dek hal 7azza?
Khaled: dawaamm mu methel ba3th elnas!
Me: malait men elba6ala t9addeg?
Khaled: ghena shlounech?
Me: 9a3eb aw9eflek shkether ana zaina ou eb a7san 7aaal!! Elly eshouf wayhek ou yesma3 9otek 9adegny mafeeh ella elkhair!
Khaled: 3asa elkhair mayfargech!!
Me: ent shlounek?
Khaled: tegdreen tgoulen raddatly elrou7!
Me: 7abeeeeeebe!!
Khaled: shbetsawen elyoum ?
Me: barou7 nady elferouseya ou madry ba3ad!
Khaled: eee ana gaayel bazaffech sh7agga dasha ferouseyya ha?
Me: waaaaaay masra3! Tawek sh7elwekk!!
Khaled: miinu ydarbek?
Me: trainer ba3ad minu?
Khaled: ta7achy 3arabyy!!
Me giggled: khef 3alay 3ad
Khaled: ta7achaayy!!
Me: mudarreb!
Khaled: ghena elyoum maku ro7a 6el3ay!
Me: yal 7emesh
Khaled: men 9ejjy
Me: enta tamer!!
I don’t care about horse riding, kel elly ehemny khaled ..
Khaled: ma yammer 3alaich 3adu, ma fash wayhech?
Me giggled: embala
Khaled: fet7y el cam 3ayal
Me: ok
I opened the cam to see his pretty wide smile ..
Actually I was smiling too, we couldn’t stop smiling ..
Khaled: wesh tha ellethy 3ainy teshoufa?
Me giggled: wayhen mtaffakh 3alaih athar elnoum
Nour: GHENA YALLAH YAWWW!!
Me nervously: ENZAINNNN!

26 comments:

  1. LOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEE

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  2. 3ajeeeeebbb♡♡ ya36eech el3afyaa!xoxo

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  3. AAAAAAAAHH EYAAANNNEEN<3!!! looovvee thiss possttt!
    Khaaaaaleeeddd challouuuuuuubbb!!
    yallaahh can't wait for the next one, lovveu:*

    -sq

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  4. woooooord caant even describe hooooww amaaazing u areeeeee i loveee u <3

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  5. Ahhhh 3jeeeeeeb <3 akheran they're back!! cant wait for the next post xo

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  6. Yaaaay I'm so happy for her luuved ur post ♡♡♡ -sol ♥

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  7. YOU MADE ME DAYYY!!! 7addi mstansaa keep going 7ail i love this post as much as i love your personality♡ allah ywafgich yarab:* -tm

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  8. YOUUUUR AMAAAAZIIIIING YOUUUR STORIEEES AREEE AMAZIIIING YOUUUR POSTS AREEE AMAZIIIIING<3! JAAAAD ALPOOOST YSHAWEEEG WAYEEEED O ENTY TSHAWGEEEN AKTHAAAAAAR<3 KHALEEEEED EYANEEEEEEEN O GHEEEENA TSHAWEEEEEG 7ADA WANASAA W AKHERAAAAN EB YETZAWEJOUUUN BS ATWAQAAA3 A7MAAAD BEKHAEEEEB 3ALAAAIHOUUUM<3 Y36EEEECH ALF ALF ALF 3AAAAAFYAAAA ENEEECH GA3DA TA36EEEENA MEN WAGTEEEEEECH ILOVEYOUU AND I LOVE YOUR POOOSTS<3 KEEP GOIIING LAMOUUUYA<3<3! - m

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  9. Omggggg im so happyyy for them♥♥♥ thanks for the amazing post♥♥

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  10. honestly, i like your stories and i read all of them


    i just have to comment on the way you write
    i like the idea/concept behind each story but can you please write in more details
    like for example less conversations and more explaining ones feelings (something other than "anaa mestansa" "ana metdhayga" … etc ) and going further into the events
    -- see this post it was all convos
    and you tend to skip important events that changed her life or personality
    you could have showed us how ghena really felt when khaled left her
    you did say she was za3lana but that was it you didn't explain it in details we didn't get affected as much,
    "ma ta'athrna wayd"
    and when she dated ahmad, we didn't know how exactly she felt
    your leaving a lot of things unwritten
    your speeding way too much. it okay to write more parts as long as your explaining and sending the message
    if english is the problem try writing more details in arabic

    I once told my friend about one of your stories… i told her everything you wrote [characters, event, feelings…etc] - geltlaha el 8e9a eb esloby
    and she got so excited to read it she wanted to know the details
    and when she did she was like "i like it better when i heard it from you Jawan"

    so i wanted to let you know what i think and what my friends think

    that's my opinion i hope this would help you improve

    yours,
    -Jawan-

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  11. jawan.. ^
    perfect english teacher!
    can you teach my how to analyis essays ??

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    1. hahaha
      i'm not much of a teacher but my high school was a bit strict when it comes to writing
      you could email me at jawan92@hotmail.com and i'll help with the basics

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  12. Awwww!! The moment is finally here! A bit too fast, we'd say but perhaps Ghena deserves all the best <3 We loved the post as usual


    Lots of Love
    Xxxxx

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    1. ps. We've dedicated a post for you, we hope you like it <3

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  13. loooovvveee ittt veeryyy fanatstic and amazing iwish u post next post eb asra3 waqt mmuken;$
    reem

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  14. 3ajeeebb , teslemeeenn:* post ASAP please?

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  15. Awwwww♡♡♡♡ 3ajeeeeb bel7aiiiillll, khaledd 7agee:'(? I guess he is the last piece:(:( mako methlah:(:( waayyyy eshaaaweeeggg qasaman bellahh! Quickly quickly nabee 3ersss:(:( iloveyouu lamouuuuuuyytteee♡. post soon yal3eshg;) x

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  16. Amazing #:-s
    Finally they Are Back !!
    I'm Realy happy for them but 3ndy e7sas Ahmed by6l3lha w by5rb -,-' !!
    Post Soon Beautiful ♥

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  17. LOVVVEEE THISSS!!! waay cuutee both of them, they make a very cute couple!! ya36eech el3afya pretty lama♥♥♥ post soon x

    -D

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  18. AaAkkkkhhh finally<3! LOOL shakly etha7ik w ana shaga el7alj while reading the post=))! Like always.. Amzing wonderful post just like you!
    -Nouraal3jmi

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  19. 3aajeeeebbbbbb♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ , mta chapter 21;c?

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  20. where are you ketakeet? :c
    khtefaitaaay don't post bs 6amneena ♡
    *N*

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  21. WHERE ARE YOOOUUU???
    post post awww mithel ma *N* said bas 6amneennaa!!!!
    ou also post asap:$
    LOVE YOUR STORIES
    DA

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  22. AMAAAAAZIING AS USUAL! I kept reading as much as I can whenever I could and it was definitely worth it! Please post soon xx.

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  23. maybela comment b3ad ... 7fa'9tay klamna... amazinnnngggggggggggggggg ?? shwaya yubaaaaa 7da zogha thanks alot..

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